I really love the seventeen 17 syllable restriction of classic haikus. It forces me to reduce my words and syllables to the very minimum while writing something important. Click for the first collection of Hamas/Gaza War Haikus; following is the second.
TOTAL VICTORY 
only way to live in peace
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Consider this slight change to allow for adaptability while retaining pragmatism:
TOTAL VICTORY 馃嚠馃嚤
strength and conviction
only way to live in peace
very beautiful, interesting 5, 5, 7-- much more positive than my depression
TOTAL VICTORY 馃嚠馃嚤
strength and conviction
only way to live in peace
unclear policy
by our government
victory seems elusive
news repetitive
not even a hit
too long without VICTORY 馃槩
self-empowerment
power of prayer
over Israel's policies
optimism's hard
humans make mistakes
peace, victory comes from Gd
a, wonderful haikus and messages
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